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I tend to struggle a bit with punctuation when writing, especially in dialogue. I just finished the first chapter of a new Twilight fic I'm writing and it's almost 7000 words, definitely the biggest chapter I've ever written. I submitted it to my favorite Twilight fanfic site but it was rejected strictly because of "Punctuation errors in and around dialogue." I was told I'd be welcome to re-submit it after the problems were taken care of. They were very nice about it and I really would love to re-submit it.

Not to toot my own horn, but I feel like it's some decent writing and I was wondering if anyone would be so kind (and have time) to have a look through it before I re-submit. I've corrected everything I can think of, but would love a second opinion. It would help if you were familiar with Twilight, but that's not 100% neccessary, since this is a AU-All human fic.

Can anyone help me out?

"When you see this, post in your own journal with your favorite quote from The Princess Bride. Preferably not "As you wish" or the Inigo Montoya speech."

Hmmm so many great lines in that fantastic movie but I think one of my favorites is:

Buttercup: We'll never survive.
Westley: Nonsense. You're only saying that because no one ever has.

 Happy Birthday to the amazing queenb23more! 

I hope you have a wonderful day! 

Well I do love him madly..Although I was THIS close to being Mrs. Longbottom. LoL.

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Ok. For anyone who has read the first seven chapters and were disappointed...

So did anyone else see the first 7 chapters of Breaking Dawn? I just finished reading them and... WHOA.

Ok so apparently my HP muse has returned, but I need a bit of help. Please hit me with your best shot!

If Harry had a fan club, what would it's members be called? You know like Jimmy Buffet has Parrotheads? Or the Grateful Dead has Dead heads? I need something funny that a group of obsessed Harry fans would call themselves. That Harry would be mortified about, upon learning of them.

And, go!